Calle Ocho was commissioned by Royal Pictures Inc. in Miami. The original writer, Joey Giannone, left the project and I was hired to do a rewrite. Since I was never paid for the rewrite despite a whole slew of promises and a written contract, I decided against doing another rewrite, and the script went to Alfredo Sanchez who rewrote it again, making it more ethnic and changing the ending. He too was not paid. Betty Kaplan (directed Antonio Banderas in his first picture) was hired to direct the film, but after six months she left the project, and I was approached by her significant other, Peter Rawley, who wanted to buy my rights to the film. He feels that Royal is not capable of getting it made. Unfortunately, I don't really have any rights unless I terminate my contract with Royal Pictures and take Robert Brent to court for breach of contract. This is a big mess no matter what happens, so let it be a warning to anyone just starting out: never write a screenplay without getting a fair amount of money up front. Here's a scene from it anyway:
INT. THE
CLUB - DAY
It's the same day and they're still at work.
Marisa is loading the refrigerators with bottles of beer and Carlos comes
out of the back room carrying a metal box with the previous night's receipts in
it and a large ledger book. He sets
these down on a table toward the back, sits down, takes out the money, and
starts by separating the charges from the cash.
The door opens and JULIO, the drummer, comes in. He
walks over to the bar, and looks over the top so he can see Marisa crouched down
in front of the refrigerators. He
admires her breasts from above.
JULIO
Oh Marisa, my heart swells with love
every time I see you.
Marisa looks up and smiles seductively.
MARISA
I don't think it's your heart, Julio.
I
think it's something else.
JULIO
That too.
Marisa laughs and stands up. She swings her hair back, leans against the back of the bar,
and looks at him.
JULIO
You know Carlos can't please you
like
I can.
MARISA
Oh, and how do I know that?
JULIO
Well, I keep telling you.
MARISA
But Julio, men always lie about how
good
they are.
JULIO
They
do?
Marisa laughs and bends down, giving him another
look at her breasts. When she
stands, she's holding a bag of garbage, which she holds out for him.
MARISA
I think so. Sometimes, they
even
lie
to themselves.
Julio ignores the bag.
JULIO
Well, I'm just telling you what the
girls say about me.
MARISA
About you, or to you?
Julio laughs appreciatively, and is about to answer
when JOSE claps him on the back.
JOSE
Admit it Julio, you're out of your
depth.
MIGUEL
Julio, Jose, come on guys, you can't
spend
the whole day flirting with that
woman.
We have work to do.
Julio sighs, takes the garbage, and heads for the
back.
JULIO
There would be nothing left of me if
I spent the whole day flirting with her.
Every time she talks she makes a little
wound in my heart.
Marisa grins at the room in general.
MIGUEL
Be glad it's just your heart.
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